Assignment #5 - Flow Battery
editI thought your changes were great. The rewording of their chem babble was easy to understand and I like how you linked it to the electrochemical cell, the only things I caught were:
In your insert for "electroactive species" you have an opening bracket but not a closing one. Also you added the word "the" "...which the electrolyte containing one or more dissolved electroactive species..." I personally think it would be easier to read using "a" but that may just be me.
Hope this helps, and good job.