User talk:Professortitan/The Guest (short story)

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Elizabeth.f.chamberlain

Instructor comments 4.24.2020

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This is looking really great: You've added several sections that are well-sourced, well-organized, and in encyclopedic language. I especially appreciate the historical context you've added, to help give some grounding for the interpretation of the story.

Other than the couple of citation needed flags I've added, my only major revision suggestion is about your final section: Wikipedia disprefers "criticism" sections. I encourage you to title that instead "Reception," and maybe reframe the opening (e.g. instead of "Despite winning...," start with that win). Elizabeth.f.chamberlain (talk) 17:29, 24 April 2020 (UTC)Reply


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Hi! Here is the link to the peer review page I filled out as I feel like this is the easiest way for you to access it! Great job! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Professortitan/The_Guest_(short_story)/Rebeccalj30_Peer_Review -Rebecca Johnson