User talk:Porter Bausch/sandbox

Peer Review

The article clearly states the points building off of the topic that are vital to understand the article better. I would suggest adding more content within the content. Maybe talking about what can be done to get the American Indians the programs and things that they need.

The lead caught my attention, because I personally didn't know that they were suffering with all of these issues on the reserve. I think that this was the best part of the article and keeps the reader interested.

I believe the structure of the article is well done, it poses the points that are most important about the topic and tells you what all of the issues are. Cbetters23 (talk) 20:57, 2 October 2023 (UTC)