User talk:Poel3nku/Menstruation hut

Peer Review

Your addition to the article is a great start. I think the inclusion of some of the modern attitudes towards the practice of Chhaupadi is something that should be added to the article. The writing is clear and not confusing to follow. Lengthwise, I think it's comparable to the rest of the article (which is good). Are you adding to the already existing section about Chhaupadi in Nepal?

However, I have a few suggestions on things that could be improved for you to consider. I'd personally add the linked page for the Accham region of Nepal- small detail, but I know Wikipedia articles often link to related articles in the text. The source you're using seems to focus more on the effects of the practice of Chhaupadi as opposed to the Menstruation huts themselves. I think adding more sources will pull away from the bias. My article is a Biography, so I'm having a difficult time looking for sources- that seems to be one of the more challenging parts about editing these articles.

If there was one thing to change- I would consider not placing as much weight on one source.

Overall, I think you're off to a great start. Hopefully my suggestions help with this project. Nachomanrandallsavage (talk) 18:46, 22 October 2021 (UTC)