Plantdad737
Joined 11 September 2018
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Elysia (Wiki Ed) in topic feedback
| This user is a student editor in Carleton_University/Colonialism_and_Post-Colonialism_(Fall_2018) . |
| This user is a student editor in Carleton_University/Analyzing_Cinema,_Gender,_and_Sexuality_(Fall_2018) . |
Desiree Lim
editMinor Revisions Needed
- Well written and with good sources!
- Restructure the Early Life and Education and Inspiration sections as single paragraphs instead of points
- Do not bold the Filmography section header and italicize all the films listed
feedback
editHi @Plantdad737: I know your course is over, so I'm not sure if you're still around and interested in editing. However, I wanted to let you know that I saw that Enclave: The Ottawa Women's Monument in your sandbox was fairly complete, so I took the liberty of moving it to mainspace. I have made some edits to it and tagged a couple sentences that need a citation, if you're interested in contributing further. Thanks, Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:11, 3 December 2018 (UTC)