User talk:PAGETURNER22/sandbox
Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback
Name of student reviewer: Keronic Grant
Date of review: 5/1/13
Name of editor: Paige Wiliams
URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PAGETURNER22/sandbox
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: -
Date review submitted to instructor: 4/6/13
Length of edit (too long/too short): good length
Image (needed/appropriate): needed
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Yes
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed:
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych):
Wikiformatting: numbered
Grammar & composition: Grammar ok
Other comments: add image
--Keronica Grant (talk) 04:14, 2 May 2013 (UTC)
Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback
Name of student reviewer: Christina GeoHaghan Christina geo
Date of review: 5/1/13
Name of editor: Paige Wiliams PAGETURNER22
URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PAGETURNER22/sandbox
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: -
Date review submitted to instructor: 4/6/13
Length of edit (too long/too short): Perfect edit length
Image (needed/appropriate): Not needed
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Yes
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: Yes
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych): Yes
Wikiformatting: Simple formatting, numbered
Grammar & composition: Correct grammar
Other comments: Check your citing!
--Christina geo (talk) 21:40, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
Name of student reviewer: Aaleksanian
Date of review:04/17/13
Name of Editor: Pageturner22
URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PAGETURNER22
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page:04/17/13
Date review submitted to instructor: 04/17/13
Length of edit (too long/too short): Meets the requirement
Image (needed/appropriate): not needed
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Accurate to textbook information
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: N/A
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych)-N/A
Wikiformatting: Good
Grammar & composition: Good
Other comments: Well written, some bullet points could be added for more credit.
Aaleksanian (talk) 14:11, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
| Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User:Aisha Hamid |
|---|---|
| Date of review | 4/25/2013 |
| Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User: Pageturner22 |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PAGETURNER22 |
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 4/25/13 |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 4/25/13 |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Length of edit is accurate. |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | No image is added, none needed. |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | Information is accurate, from textbook. |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | N/A |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | N/A |
| Wikiformatting | Formatting is good. |
| Grammar & composition | Grammar and composition is accurate, no errors. |
| Other comments | The references that are cited need to be edited. |
(Aisha Hamid (talk) 00:10, 26 April 2013 (UTC))
Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User:MsPsychology
Date of review 4/25/2013
Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User: Pageturner22
URL of editor’s Userpage http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PAGETURNER22
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 4/25/13
Date review submitted to instructor 4/25/13
Length of edit (too long/too short) Length of edit is accurate.
Image (needed/appropriate) No image is added, none needed.
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) Information is accurate, from textbook.
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed N/A
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) N/A
Wikiformatting Formatting is good.
Grammar & composition Grammar and composition is accurate,there are no errors.
Other comments Good job! (User:MsPsychology (talk) 00:10, 25 April 2013 (UTC))