Is it possible to get direct constructive criticism on how to make my references more viable? I read all the instructions/suggestions very carefully and thought that I had done so already. I thought that's what the linking function did, was let you look at the references and judge if they are correct. Thank you.

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Hello, Olivia Junell. You have new messages at Wikipedia:Requests_for_feedback/2011_April_18#William_Hundley.
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