User talk:Nour.m.alabase/sandbox

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Ian (Wiki Ed) in topic Feedback

Ok so this is just a generalized outline I think is a good start, feel free to add on or suggest doing it differently. I think the sowed be a good start though.

-Intro- summarize and introduce individual -Different subjects to talk about :(add more if you can) 1.Personal Life 2.Education 3.Influences 4. Career History 5. Research and Ideas/Findings 6. Awards/ Honors/ impact on modern psychology -References Triicberg12 (talk)

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@Nour.m.alabase, Erin.l.anderson, and Triicberg12: Nice work on your draft. A few things moving foward

  • You need to include inline references. Check out the Sources and Citations training if you need a refresher on how to add sources. It would also be helpful if you can find some sources that are about her (written by an independent third party) rather than by her.
  • Adding links to other articles helps integrate your work into Wikipedia, and makes it easy for readers to learn more about things they might want to learn more about.
  • Only proper nouns should be capitalized
  • Keep quotes to a minimum. They are copyright material, so like any other non-free content used in Wikipedia they should be used sparingly.
  • It needs careful copyediting - for example:

    Zeigarnik continued to aspire inspire many people which kept her work influenced by doing Clinical Practice.

    [that last bit is unclear]. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:01, 6 December 2016 (UTC)Reply