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Latest comment: 7 years ago by 128.2.149.36 in topic Article review

Article review

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Hi classmate, I read your article you posted on the blog about "Energy in Qatar". I think you add a very important section to this article by adding crude oil in Qatar. The reference sources are trustworthy. The section follows a clear flow. My only suggestion is, since the current article has a section about global warming, have you thought about connect the crude oil section to global warming, by say how much of the CO2 is from burning crude oil in Qatar?

Best, Qing

Hi!

I like your article very much and find it very interesting. It would be nice if you could include where this energy is used in Qatar and also what technologies Qatar is using.

Thanks, Serene Tan — Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.2.149.36 (talk) 17:34, 25 April 2017 (UTC)Reply