I apologise for breaching any kind of rules. I am new to wikipedia and I am just trying to make our company page as up to date as possible. From what i can see this has been deemed advertising...Would you be able to provide some clarity? I will adjust accordingly, many thanks
- Sure. For example, you inserted the following content into the article: "HCL AXON is a global pioneer in leveraging leading technologies to drive value realization. Our value management approach accelerates the realization of benefits from your investments by aligning IT to clients’ required business outcomes." Those sentences contain excessive advertising jargon, and the information conveyed by them (HCL AXON is a global technology company) is in reality very small. What sounds appropriate for a statement in the company portfolio is often out of place in a neutral encyclopedia article. Does that help? Syrthiss (talk) 14:07, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
{{unblock|reason=Your reason here ~~~~}}, but you should read the guide to appealing blocks first. Syrthiss (talk) 13:39, 21 June 2011 (UTC)Ok, i understand now so for example is this ok? HCL AXON – is a business transformation consultancy. HCL AXON provides consulting, hosting and BPO services. HCL AXON is a wholly owned subsidiary of HCL Technologies, with over 80,000 employees. HCL is recognized for its management practices “Employee First”, this approach is taught at Harvard. so just stating the facts? - i appreciate your help.
- Yes, that is better. You would probably have to expand the BPO acronym, and would have to show with a reliable source who recognized it for its management practices. The parts about 80000 employees and such can be taken as read, if that material exists on the corporate website. If you are willing to edit without introducing the advertising, I'm willing to unblock your account. Syrthiss (talk) 14:36, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
I am willing to not introduce advertising i will draft carefully on the next occassion. Thanks for your help