User talk:Nathaniel QMed/sandbox

Comments

• This is not reviewable with the weird citations
• this is not the way that we write about treatments. Please read some treatment sections in medical articles that are GA or FA to see how we usually handle treatment.
• mayo clinic is not MEDRS.
• If you want to have a "first aid" section that is fine. Please do it and describe what standard first aid is; saying what should not be done without saying what should be done, is odd.
• i suggest organizing treatments based on level of severity of hypothermia.

-- Jytdog (talk) 21:27, 5 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi Jytdog. Thanks for the feedback. Can you be more specific? What is weird about the citations, and what prevents you from reviewing them? Please be more specific on why this is not the way to write about treatments. Give an example. Why is mayo clinic not a medical reference? (I think this is what you're suggesting) Without clarification, there's little I can do with your current feedback. Cheers. Nathaniel QMed (talk) 13:52, 16 November 2018 (UTC)