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These edits are very well cited and provide clear information about the subject. It is presented in a very readable and understandable way to those who may be searching for this sort of information without having as much background as we do in this course.
I think the best change that could be made to this so far is better answered in another question. Once more I think adding a bit more about his more recent research may be helpful.
This is all very good information, however, I think the best way that this could be improved is if you are able to go a little more in-depth on information about his more recent research in queer theory and disabled communities in Sweden. Since it is his more recent works I know this may not be possible but it also may be the reason people would be researching him and providing that information in the Wikipedia page would be helpful to others in researching him.
I found how you formatted everything to be really well done, and I think I may take from this a better way to format my own draft.