March 2012

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. Everyone is welcome to make constructive contributions to Wikipedia, but at least one of your recent edits, such as the one you made to Yangzhong, did not appear to be constructive and has been automatically reverted (undone) by an automated computer program called ClueBot NG.

Your edits to Yangzhong

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Hi, I'm one of the helpers for the NNU Class Project. I noticed that you have made some changes to the article Yangzhong. However, I have removed those changes because they are not referenced and the tone is not appropriate for Wikipedia.

  • Wikipedia only talks about what reliable sources have talked about, so unless you can find reliable sources saying that Yangzhong is famous for its fugu and clovers or that Daqo Group is well-known, you can't put those things in the article.
  • Furthermore, even if you were to find sources, "They are both as delicious as everything! If you cook them together, the taste will be unexceptedly great" is not appropriate for Wikipedia (just as no paper encyclopedia would ever say "Broccoli is absolutely delicious! You should try it with oyster sauce."). You need to use a more neutral tone, for example, "The fugu and clovers are known for their freshness and they are frequently combined in dishes."

I would suggest that you work on the articles you have been assigned for now, though you are welcome to try editing other articles if you have the time to learn more about the workings and rules of Wikipedia. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. Good luck! wctaiwan (talk) 16:17, 14 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

In response to your feedback

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That's what we are here for, so 没关系 (I hope this is ok).

Lectonar (talk) 11:19, 11 April 2012 (UTC)Reply