Aagwebb (talk) 16:13, 7 October 2011 (UTC) Good. Your feedback for the existing pages should be more specific as to what should be done to improve them. You do a reasonably good job explaining your own work. When you're done with this page, I want you to email Peter Zeitler and David Montgomery and see what they think. I like your basic proposed page structure, you're awfully ambitious with the number of figures but if you keep them simple, maybe you can pull it off. 28/30.