Mohammed75
Joined 11 January 2010
Latest comment: 14 years ago by PMDrive1061 in topic Re. your article
Re. your article
editHi, Mohammed. The article as it originally stood was very difficult to read and appeared to have been a machine translation. So too was your second attempt which had some French words and phrases in it. Redirecting such articles to existing articles is common practice until the article can be made to stand on its own. I've cleaned up the grammar and added some "cleanup" templates to alert other editors. Nothing personal and your contribution is appreciated. --PMDrive1061 (talk) 00:02, 24 March 2010 (UTC)