User talk:Mntipps/The Bellingham Herald
Hi Mntipps!
This article has greatly improved from the previous article! I think you did a great job adding content to the lead. The photos you chose were a lot more relevant, and it's great that you added media and subscription information - it makes the article a lot less dated. Some content ideas you to think about adding could be to include more information on the newspaper itself, as well as the authors? Could also mention competitors, revenue, as well as business success over the years. Information like this can also include graphs, which could help the understanding for readers. References look good! Also love the layout. Savula98 (talk) 23:10, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
Feedback on your article
edit@Mntipps: Your article is really fantastic. What a difference between this and the version over at The Bellingham Herald. Take a look at this page of ideas for final polishing and then start following the process of moving your material live into the mainspace. Thanks for all your hard work! —mako๛ 23:06, 13 February 2020 (UTC)