- There is a large discrepancy of quantity of information from plot to reception
- It may be helpful to include background information about the significance of Austen fan fiction
- There is little information about the publication/background of this novel
- For many book pages on Wikipedia, there are detailed character summaries
- There could be a portion dedicated to summarizing/linking to Pride and Prejudice
- There are grammatical errors in the summary and overall proofreading problems (including the lowercase "I" in the Reception portion)
