User talk:Mkf51/Race Suicide
Latest comment: 2 months ago by Clr127 in topic peer review
peer review
editLead:
I think the lead does a good job introducing the topic and its importance
Structure:
- The article was definitely well organized, and all the information felt like it was in the right place in a logical order.
Sources:
The sources added seem good. You might want a source for the first paragraph of the language section, and for the last two sentences of the first paragraph of the “Race Suicide in the US” section.
The last sentence in hypersexualization section definitely sums up the section well but might feel a little like drawing a conclusion. Clr127 (talk) 03:04, 10 April 2024 (UTC)