User talk:Mges24/sandbox

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@Mges24 and Amckinney29: Nice work on your article draft, but it isn't nearly complete

• A Wikipedia article should begin with a lead section. See pages 7-9 of the Editing Wikipedia brochure
• References go after punctuation, not before, and there shouldn’t be spaces before refs.
• References should appear immediately after the statements they support. There should be a minimum of one reference per paragraph, and there shouldn’t be any text after the last reference in a paragraph. A lot of what you have written lacks references.
• You need to use paragraphs - you can't write an encyclopedia article using bullet points. Your opening sentence isn't a complete sentence.
• gutstrength.com does not appear to be a reliable source. You should be working from the best sources available - peer reviewed journal articles, scholarly books - not a self-published website.

This isn't nearly ready. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:19, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

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Although outline was created by two users, the final composed wiki article only composed of one user's work, Mges24 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mges24 (talk • contribs) 16:58, 11 April 2017 (UTC)