User talk:Mgcrutch/sandbox

Peer Review

Sandbox has solid information with good structure. Information is written well, except some parts of the biography section were a little wordy. Otherwise it seems to be a solid draft.

I think you need to change the second word in the first paragraph to "on" instead of "in", and add a period after the h in Ph.D. Also, consider changing the wording of the phrase "she has been awarded numerous prestigious awards" by replacing "awarded" or "awards" with a synonym.