Meeshmoo
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Hi, Welcome to my talk page! --Meeshmoo (talk) 16:54, 28 September 2017 (UTC)
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editIn the Boys Over Flowers entry I found the mistake that under the character Junpei Oribe it says that: “Junpei's real motive is to lure Domyouji for revenge for injuring his older brother who is sent to the hospital after Tsukasa kicked him in the stomach so hard it caused a stomach rupture.” In reality the person who Tsukasa (Domyouji) kicked in the stomach is his childhood friend and Domyouji strangled his brother but that is not a factor in his revenge. Another issue on the page is that the 11th refrence is not properly sourced. --Meeshmoo (talk) 05:20, 5 October 2017 (UTC)
Article Two
editOn the Boys Over Flowers (TV series) reference 18 is a broken link. Reference 19 is not properly cited and also does not seem to connect to anything in the article. --Meeshmoo (talk) 05:20, 5 October 2017 (UTC)