User talk:Maxeinek/sandbox
Latest comment: 6 years ago by AngeliqueLang
Hi Kevin, I have copied your sentences and here is a suggestion: remove 'year to year' as your point gets across without, and it becomes redundant.
The boundary between desert and grassland is constantly changing [year to year]. This is mostly due to the climate conditions before the growing season which influence evapotranspiration and subsequent plant growth.
The rest looks good to me!