User talk:Matt Tosa/sandbox

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Matt Tosa

Maybe talk a little more about what a gender gap report or gender gap score is. Other than that it was good and informative and didn't really have any sound of bias. Cakers12 (talk) 16:14, 24 February 2017 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for the feed back. I went ahead and added in a couple sentences explaining how the WEF goes about coming up with the scores they give. Matt Tosa (talk) 19:03, 24 February 2017 (UTC)Reply

This article was very informative and showed no bias whatsoever. Maybe break up your stats and findings a bit, the numbers can be a bit much when all in one paragraph, but if that is what you are mainly reporting about then it is fine. Good sources as well.--Lstaben15 (talk) 22:00, 24 February 2017 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the feed back. I'll try to include more explanation of what the numbers and figures mean in between the actual stating of the statistics to give a little space. Matt Tosa (talk) 23:21, 28 February 2017 (UTC)Reply