User talk:MattDusenbury/sandbox

Feedback

Hey! Here's the feedback for your sandbox article. Let me know if you have any questions.

• Try to address the tag already on the article
• Take out the spaces before the bullet points so they'll format properly
• Add retrieval dates for your sources - this allows accurate archives to be found if the links go dead in the future
• Nice criticism section, though it could use a couple more sources
• When repeating the same source, use WP:NAMEDREFS to avoid redundancy. In general, aim for at least 1 citation per paragraph, more as necessary
• If you'd like to move this to mainspace, you can merge it with the pre-existing article using copy-paste - just make sure to note in your edit summary where you're copying from. Nikkimaria (talk) 12:33, 10 April 2012 (UTC)