User talk:Mariocartlover/Prytania Street
Hey my name is Adrian. I'm one of your peer review editors. I just wanted to let you know I left you some feedback on your article. Let me know if you have any questions.
Best, AJ
Hello, my name is Laeh I have submitted your peer review! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Laeh101 (talk • contribs) 19:26, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
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editThe structure you've outlined looks like a good approach. As you can see, it's all a bit too thin right now, though. Don't just list details. Explore them a bit. What is so special about Commander's Palace, for example? What about Sophie B. Wright school? What about Touro Infirmary? There's lots to consider here, but it's all been reduced to the barest details now.
You're also failing to include your sources. Some of this may be common knowledge, but the street car section, in particular, clearly comes from one or more sources and needs proper citations.