User talk:MSongle/sandbox

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@Hajiman, Ziikoe, and MSongle: Very nice work on your draft. I think it would improve things if you converted the "Research Areas and Topics of Interest" section into a paragraph instead of bullet points (but that's not essential). Beyond that

• Section headers shouldn't be capitalized. So "Research Areas and Topics of Interest" should be "Research areas and topics of interest"
• You shouldn't have a reference in a section header, and it shouldn't be before the text. So move the one that's currents in "Research Areas and Topics of Interest" down to the end of the section. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:28, 7 December 2016 (UTC)