User talk:MOIN2022/To Live (novel)

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. If you're feeling stuck, please let me know how I can support you.

One area to improve for this article is your use of sources and citations. Right now what I see is a fair bit of text being added without the sources to back it up.

An important issue to think about for this article is how best to handle a plot synopsis. This page has the Wikipedia guide to the topic: Wikipedia:How_to_write_a_plot_summary -- I hope it is helpful.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:39, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I just reviewed your article! --Lydialzy (talk) 07:13, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

Go Live Approval

Hi @MOIN2022: --

This article looks like it needs more work before it would receive full credit for this assignment, but you have approval to move it to live if you are ready. If you want to, you can move it to live and then continue to work. The goal is to advance the article by a quality class in ways that demonstrate engagement with the norms of Wikipedia.

In particular, I'm concerned about the sources and the norms around plot summary that I mentioned in my preliminary feedback.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:

1. Final read-through draft.
2. Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
3. Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
4. Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
5. Note on article talk page.
6. Note at the top of your sandbox version.
7. Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
8. Celebrate!

@Khascall: Hi Kaylea, Thanks for your feedback and I think I will go through the norms for plot summary again to double-check what I need for improvement. Just a quick question, Do you think sources cited in other sections look good to go? --MOIN2022 (talk) 06:22, 9 February 2022 (UTC)

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:14, 9 February 2022 (UTC)