User talk:MGava01/Stream power

Hi Marco,

Here is the review of your article. Let me know if you have any questions.

-Two ands here " hydrologists and and geomorphologist"

For this sentence, maybe split into two sentences or combine the second sentence with the first? (i.e. uncapitalize It to combine to a full sentence) "Although many authors had suggested the use of power formulas in sediment transport in the decades preceding Bagnold's work[2][3], and in fact Bagnold himself suggested it a decade before putting it into practice in one of his other works[4]. It wasn't until 1966 that R. A. Bagnold tested this theory experimentally to validate whether it would indeed work or not[5]."

Suggested changes in ** -The lack of fixed guidelines on how to define stream power in this early stage lead to many authors publising work under the name stream power while not always quantifying *it as the same definition*, *leading* to partially failed efforts *of* *establishing* naming conventions for the various forms of the formula by Rhoads two decades later in 1986[6][7].

against the bed: none can be added - should this be a semicolon?

For you equations, some have : and some are blank. Maybe go through and make sure they are all consistent?

Title "Sheer stress" is spelt wrong - shear stress?

It looks good, I like the moving image, If you want me to take another look at it later when you have added more just let me know. Emily environment (talk) 18:09, 14 November 2021 (UTC)Emily_environment

Thank you Emily! MGava01 (talk) 20:44, 17 November 2021 (UTC)