User talk:Lukenam12/Jejueo

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Chuck Haberl in topic Final Review

Final Review edit

Hi Luke, this is my feedback for your final project. As a reminder, the 6 points on which I'm grading you are Language, Structure, Balance, Accuracy, Relevance, and Length. Here are my assessments on each of those areas:

  1. Language: On the whole, the article employs proper English spelling and grammar, but the language is unencyclopedic (too much editorializing). 4 points.
  2. Structure: The article follows its own template and could benefit from better organization. 3 points.
  3. Balance: The article appears to reflect a neutral point of view. 5 points.
  4. Accuracy: None of the claims are backed by citations to legitimate sources; there is a bibliography, but its relationship to the text is not explicit. 1 point.
  5. Relevance: Not all of information is relevant, but most is. 4 points.
  6. Length: Word count 1176/2000 (including headers but not bibliography). 3 points.

The final score is 20/30. Have a great summer! Chuck Haberl (talk) 22:54, 11 May 2021 (UTC)Reply