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The article also analyzed the women's Political Action Committee that EMILY's List. Is it possible to elaborate more on the PAC? Or maybe even link it to a wiki page if one exists? Jevilla001 (talk) 17:20, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Citations needed: "The program focuses on mobilizing women by airing TV advertisements, mailing advertisements, and reaching out to voters through online access. By targeting women who are 52% of voters, EMILY's List tries to impact women representation in office through a majority that can easily change the outcome of an election." Jamiewang47 (talk) 17:31, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Make sure you italicize the name of the programs as headers. --Anjinimathur (talk) 17:31, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

“EMILY'S List in the past has received some criticism from how much money they are accepting and where that money is going to as being a Political Action Committee or PAC. In Nick Hoffman's article Emily's List vs. FEC[1] he discusses EMILY's List as a non-profit that has had trouble with the Federal Election Commission or FEC.”

Instead of saying or ___, you can just put PAC and FEC in parenthesis to make it look better and less wordy. --Anjinimathur (talk) 17:31, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

“EMILY's List has been criticized for pushing the allowance of no limit on how much money can be donated to campaigns.”

You can probably expand on this and add an example. Make sure you cite this point too. --Anjinimathur (talk) 17:31, 28 November 2018 (UTC)