Littlegreybird

Hello, Littlegreybird. You recently wanted to move User:Littlegreybird/Iain scott to Iain Scott. Before I do that, you need to read the Wikipedia Manual of Style. In other words, this is the user guide to Wikipedia. Once you have added a new section, contact me by adding a new section on this page. Good luck on your article!  Btilm  02:33, 21 October 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I have wikified this article to some extent. Something tells me that you didn't read the full WP:MOS. The following are some of the things I fixed.

• You were making section headings like the following: <br /> '''Analyst of Enterprise'''.

If you read WP:HEAD and Help:Section, you will find that the following would be the proper way to make a section heading: ==Analyst of Enerprise==.

• The Table of Contents is displayed automatically when you have 3 or more sections. It will only be displayed if you use the equal signs. Please read Help:Section for more information.

• Take a look at this page if you want to know how to use wiki markup. It looks like you are trying to use xml or dhtml. Well, I have got some new for you. Wiki is the new markup language!

• This is how you were making new paragraphs:

<br />Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipisicing elit, sed do eiusmod.

<br />Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipisicing elit, sed do eiusmod.

This is the proper way to make new paragraphs:

Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipisicing elit, sed do eiusmod

Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipisicing elit, sed do eiusmod

The <br /> tag is not necessary, and there is a very seldom chance that you will ever have to use it.

If you have any more questions, please contact me on my talk page.  Btilm  21:14, 27 October 2009 (UTC)

References for Iain Scott

Hi Littlegreybird. The Iain Scott article has three references that are not from enterpriseisland but all three are to non-working links. Generally, you need independent sources that assert that the person being written about is notable. Could you please fix these references and, if they don't assert notability, find other reliable sources that do. Thanks for creating the article and apologies for making you do more leg work! Regards. --RegentsPark (sticks and stones) 22:06, 28 October 2009 (UTC)