Lilly's Peer Review
editHi Lily! I think you are on a good track for your article. I noticed that you want to change the organization of Gordon College's page and I think that is a good idea. Also it's smart to make sure that the article reads as neutral. If it originally read like a brochure then that is definitely not neutral and it will definitely benefit from your editing. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to seeing what you do with this page.