User talk:Lilitiana/sandbox
Hello there,
I really like your article.
Here are a few suggestions I have, as to how your article could be improved:
- you should check your spelling, there are a couple of typo's here and there.
- in Ecology section, you have mentioned that the fungus grows in temperature climates, you should try to expand a little more on that, maybe mention a particular geographic location with which its incidence has been associated. Also, it would probably be a good idea to mention what are the optimal temperatures for growth, I know you have it in another section but it would be quite helpful to note it here as well, in terms of it either being psychophilic/mesophilic/thermophilic.
- In growth and morphology section you mention that this fungus reproduces with conidia, are they macro or micro?
- also, in terms of citation, I think we have to place them prior to . or , rather than after.
Best of luck with the rest of your assignment. Good job!
Impressive!
editGreat work Lilitiana. Your article looks very informative and thorough. I can't wait to read it when its complete. Its hard for me to find an area of improvement in your work, but perhaps you could go over your spelling and grammar. Nonetheless, great work!
Also, come have a look at my article! Its not as developed as yours, but I could use some suggestions.
Keep it up! JasminePrincess (talk) 07:53, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
Photo added
editI added a photo for you. Please make sure you format the references as I showed you and described on the course Wiki page. Also, if you cannot locate a reference for the alleged athlete deaths attributed this fungus, you need to remove the statement (even though it was present in the original stub). Medmyco (talk) 22:10, 4 November 2014 (UTC)
Pathogenicity
editDo not distinguish between disease caused by asexual and sexual forms, they are the same biological agent. The asexual for will turn into the sexual form in culture, and vice versa. They are one in the same. Medmyco (talk) 21:03, 6 November 2014 (UTC)