User talk:Lauraredondo95/sandbox

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Good start, excellent references!

• Note that gene names should be italicized (the F11 gene) and the protein product of that gene is not (the F11 protein).
• "However, this is not always the case in patients affected by Haemophilia C—suggesting that environmental factors may play a role in the severity of the disease." -- replace the hyphen with a comma and this is a great sentence!

Vellichor (talk) 02:56, 5 November 2015 (UTC)