User talk:Lagcceng103/sandbox2

Maybe re word

a sixteen-year-old who has tired of being among relatives she hardly knows A sixteen-year-old who was tired of being among relatives she hardly knows,Katiea32 (talk) 18:20, 12 April 2016 (UTC)

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Hi, The plot was typed well but there could be more written in there. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Anneteag (talk • contribs) 17:41, 17 May 2016 (UTC)

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Hello! I suggest that you add a little more information to the very top part of the page, the introduction, to make it a little more helpful! Maybe when it was published, where it was published, or if the author has won any other awards.

Alexwendi (talk) 17:59, 17 May 2016 (UTC)

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Great description. More information about the story may have been useful. A picture of the cover,though not necessary,might have been useful for the description as well. JAries328 (talk) 01:08, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

Great Article

Great article and all. Only suggestion is maybe expanding some of the sections with a little more information to make them more helpful.- NostalgicIntrovert — Preceding unsigned comment added by NostalgicIntrovert (talk • contribs) 06:40, 7 June 2016 (UTC)