Ladydayy

Hi Kyla- For your peer-review • Your concept (Reciprocal Determinism) should be in bold (this is Wikipedia’s style), and make sure to keep it as the first term in the article, which you currently have it as. • Does Triadic reciprocal causation have a Wikipedia page you can link it to? • The box, which has the 3 factors by Albert Bandura, should be taken out, just list the three factors. • You are missing a “</ref>” tag so it is showing the error on the page. • It looks like you just pasted your changes above the original article- you should incorporate your subheadings and changes into the article. • The original article has some incomplete references that should be taken out. For example, “Bandura (1986)” tells us nothing. Make sure to take out the information from this reference in the article. • Are there images you can add? • The Triadic reciprocal causation factors need to be defined and elaborated on. • Monoamine oxidase A should have a link to another Wikipedia article if possible. • “Wright’s Law” reference is not valid. Is a “.com”- need .edu or .gov to be reliable. • Does diathesis-stress model have a link to a Wikipedia article? • I think that you have great content, and it’s mainly just formatting issues and sources to be removed from the original article. -Hope this helps! -Kaylee Kmunch1 (talk) 18:27, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

March 2012

Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. Although everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia, please note that there is a Manual of Style that should be followed to maintain a consistent, encyclopedic appearance. Deviating from this style, as you did in Reciprocal determinism, makes articles harder to read. Please take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. Thank you. Toddst1 (talk) 21:16, 29 March 2012 (UTC)