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Social control theory Sources

Heiss, Jerold. "Family Theory 20 Years Later." Contemporary Sociology 9.2 (1980): 201-204. Academic Search Complete. Web. 24 Oct. 2015.<http://web.b.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/ehost/pdfviewer/pdfviewer?sid=2e47adb5-a167-49da-9d88-1fae2da5d377%40sessionmgr112&vid=4&hid=101>.

Roberts, Joanne, Ismail Dincer Gunes, and Rudy Ray Seward. "The Impact Of Self Esteem, Family Rituals, Religiosity, And Participation In Conforming Activities Upon Delinquency: A Comparison Of Young Adults In Turkey And The United States." Journal Of Comparative Family Studies 42.1 (2011): 59-76. Academic Search Complete. Web. 24 Oct. 2015. <http://web.b.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/ehost/pdfviewer/pdfviewer?sid=34502fec-0fcb-460a-a2e2-b72973264d7f%40sessionmgr110&vid=1&hid=101>.

Box, Steven. "Becoming Deviant (Book)." Sociology 4.3 (1970): 403-404. Academic Search Complete. Web. 24 Oct. 2015. <http://resolver.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/openurl?sid=EBSCO%3aa9h&genre=article&issn=00380385&ISBN=&volume=4&issue=3&date=19700901&spage=403&pages=403-404&title=Sociology&atitle=Becoming+Deviant+(Book).&aulast=Box%2c+Steven&id=DOI%3a&site=ftf-live>.

Ngo, Fawn T., et al. "Role-Taking And Recidivism: A Test Of Differential Social Control Theory." JQ: Justice Quarterly 28.5 (2011): 667-697. Academic Search Complete. Web. 24 Oct. 2015.<http://web.b.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/ehost/command/detail?sid=2e47adb5-a167-49da-9d88-1fae2da5d377%40sessionmgr112&vid=16&hid=101>.

The sources look okay, but you should post them in the sandbox, not the talk page. Josef Horáček (talk) 17:14, 29 October 2015 (UTC)

You were supposed to add the sources to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:05, 3 November 2015 (UTC)

I posted them into the articleKwhite15 (talk) 20:34, 11 November 2015 (UTC)

Psychology of education lead section

Psychology of education is a form of psychology in which psychologists look into the different factors of life that effect the educational levels of a human being. People of different intelligence levels different levels of education. In some cases, genes and environmental relationship can affect the outcomes of a child’s educational levels. Many studies has shown that a child’s educational level can depend on maternal IQ and performance. Other factors can affect educational success such as socioeconomic status and future outcomes and education. Studies show that the higher the education, the higher level jobs a person can get. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kwhite15 (talk • contribs) 00:39, 31 October 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry to let you know that someone else claimed this article before you. You need to choose a different article, make sure no one else has claimed it, and add it to the course page next to your name. Then write another draft. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:06, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

Epidemiology of periodontal disease new lead section

Epidemiology of periodontal disease is the study of patterns, causes, and effects of periodontal diseases. Periodontal disease is a disease affecting the tissue surrounding the teeth. This causes the gums and the teeth to separate making spaces that become infected. The immune system tries to fight the toxins breaking down the bone and tissue connecting to the teeth to the gums. The teeth will have to be removed. This is an advance stage of gum disease that has multiple definitions. Adult periodontitis affects less than 10 to 15% of the population in industrialized countries, mainly adults around the ages of 50 to 60. The disease is now declining world-wide.

This is a good lead. Go ahead and post it. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:23, 9 November 2015 (UTC)

Papapanou, Panos N. “Periodontal Diseases: Epidemiology.” Annals of Periodontology 1.1 (1996): 1-36. Journal of Periodontology Online. Web. 30 Oct. 2015. <http://europepmc.org/abstract/med/9118256>.

“Periodontal (Gum) Disease: Causes, Symptoms, and Treatments.” Periodontal (Gum) Disease: Causes, Symptoms, and Treatments. Sept. 2013. Web. 2 Nov. 2015. <http://www.nidcr.nih.gov/oralhealth/Topics/GumDiseases/PeriodontalGumDisease.htm>. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kwhite15 (talk • contribs) 21:20, 2 November 2015 (UTC)