User talk:Kpl2099/sandbox

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Grant4493

Grant4493 (talk) 16:30, 25 April 2018 (UTC) I like your Wikipedia page you have a variety of different areas for the amount of information you have on the park. I also like the addition of the picture. You should try to add more sources to your page. Check to see if some areas of your article could be more neutral than others. Try adding information about who built the park to get more sources and info.Reply

-Grant4493Grant4493 (talk) 16:30, 25 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

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In one of the first sections you mention that the park has lighting available until 11 pm, and then you later have a section titled Hours that only says dawn-dusk. Maybe combine these categories and clarify with more numbers. What is the ADA? maybe you could make a link to a wiki page on it so you dont have to elaborate.