User talk:Knkn8/Decarceration in the United States

Comments from Prof

• in your first sentence, include the citation right after the period even if you cite it again later!
• the last sentence of your first paragraph needs to be formatted as a "see also" note and would appear at the start of that subsection in italics. I can figure out how to do this if you can't!

*make your second heading more to the point: "Related Pages"

*with the Lead section it looks like you copy-pasted while in Read vs Edit mode so the citations didn't come with. If you have one, a citation for your added part would be good but may not be necessary

• Decarceration Activists subsection -- same thing no citations probably bc of how you cut and pasted. Also it is redundant with Prison Abolitionists subsection that is in the article now so you'll get pushback if you're trying to replace that with your section. let's discuss this part? But integrating Boudin into there seems to make sense!

--Liliput000 (talk) 19:02, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

I added italics to the suggested edits we have already made --Knkn8 (talk)