User talk:Knarellano/sandbox
Latest comment: 6 years ago by TMFrieson
Looks like you are falling behind a bit working toward first draftRJBazell (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 21:00, 6 November 2017 (UTC)
Hi Knarellano,
I am assigned to peer-review your article, and I wanted you to know that this article has some great information in it. However, there are a few grammatical errors in the lead, and the history section needs to be completed. I think it would also be extremely beneficial if more statistics (quantitative data) were added to support your points.