User talk:Klink216/sandbox
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Jagrif02 in topic Feedback on article contribution
Feedback on article contribution
editComments are in no particular order:
- Very good job maintaining neutral tone, I think, while still getting across your intended contribution.
- Expansion/elaboration - your plans for adding information about another religion seem to be a natural here.
- Very good first draft.Jagrif02 (talk) 20:14, 18 October 2016 (UTC)