Hello, KiondraMcGee
- First off your article was very hard to find more info. on. I like the revisions you have done they are much needed. As our professor has stated their arent any citations and lot of what you have stated seems to be straight out of an article. I would cite that and also there are some typos just so you publish it with the typos. I found one research experiment that pertains to pillow talk here is the citation for it. I am not sure if it will help you all that much. Also your article revisions state that men do not experience sex talk as much as woman, including a research experiment that has proven these statistics would be great. Other than that great revisions, it makes the article much stronger. Pkpe222 (talk) 03:19, 20 April 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry here is the citation:
Sexual compulsivity, state affect, and sexual risk behavior in a daily diary study of gay and bisexual men. Grov, Christian; Golub, Sarit A; Mustanski, Brian; Parsons, Jeffrey T. Psychology of Addictive Behaviors. Vol.24(3), Sep 2010, pp. 487-497. [Journal; Peer Reviewed Journal] Year of Publication 2010 Pkpe222 (talk) 03:21, 20 April 2012 (UTC)