User talk:Killerwhale19/sandbox
Hi guys, I read all the article and I think u are doing a very well job. The only comment I feel like making is that you could rearrange the introductory part which for me, who don’t know the subject well, is not very clear. --AGioconda (talk) 15:09, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you for your advice, we are still working on it, we'll do better.Killerwhale19 (talk) 18:53, 30 November 2020 (UTC)
Peer review
editThe work is very great, just in some paragraph I Put some ( //) , that is where you should to fix and make everything in one concept and no too many sentence --Regina della federico II (talk) 16:04, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
Hi all, I think that the article is very good and complete. The topic is well organized and the lecture is easy. My suggestion is just to add the fact that this metabolism is actually considered a very ancient one. Precisely it has been proposed as a potentially ancestral metabolism in the article of Canfield and Raiswell 1999 (DOI: https://doi.org/10.2475/ajs.299.7-9.697 ). Hence, I advise to insert just a sentence (even without going too much in depth) relating to this evolutive perspective. Anyhow, congratulations on this good job! --Ilaria D'Aniello (talk) 12:53, 3 December 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for your review and useful tip. We will surely read the article you recommended and we will add this information.--D.Ascione (talk) 15:30, 3 December 2020 (UTC)
Hi guys, I notice that the work is going on with many improvements, I think they are very good! I have to make just a tip about the "ecology" paragraph. In this period: "They are capable to grow at a wide range of temperature (from −2 to 110 °C) and pH (from 1 to 10.5), However, growth is observed between a temperature range 37-95°C [...] and a pH range 5-7.5." I don't understant exactly what the two ranges of temperature and pH refer to. Are they different because the former (-2° to 110° and pH 1 to 10,5) are just estimated and the seconds (37-39° and pH 5-7,5) are the observed ones? I propose to specify it.
Otherwise everything is fine, good job again! --Ilaria D'Aniello (talk) 15:40, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
- thank you Ilaria, we discussed this problem before but we forgot to fix it immediately. Thank you for reminding us!--Killerwhale19 (talk) 15:53, 10 December 2020 (UTC)