Peer Review: I found your article to be well-organized as the overall structure of your article is understandable. Furthermore, you have multiple citations that ties in to your article which seems neutral and relevant. My only suggestion is to expand your "Text" subheading into further detail if there is any more information or other citations that could be used to build on. Otherwise, your article is clearly well-written with an added note of adjustment towards your "Text" subheading.