User talk:KateSage/sandbox

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Nice job expanding the leukodystrophy article. I made a few minor formatting edits, but there are a few things that still need to be fixed in the article

• You have statements that are not obviously tied to cited sources. For example, the last sentence of the first paragraph of the "Symptoms and clinical features" and the entire second paragraph lack supporting sources. There are quite a few sentences, and more than a few sections that have this problem. This needs to be fixed before you move your edits into the main article.

• You should also use citation templates for your sources. If you look at the top of the edit window (the place you type text after you hit 'edit') you should see the word 'Cite' on the toolbar. Click on that, selected appropriate template from the drop-down menu, and fill it in as best you can. Doing that creates a better formatted reference, and one that it easier to maintain in the long run.

You have done a really nice job on this, but it is important that everything you add to the article is supported by citations. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:08, 27 March 2015 (UTC)