Jwood57
Joined 2 February 2015
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Josefhoracek in topic Copyediting: Hook (film)
Copyediting: Hook (film) edit
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hook_(film)
Overall, the content of the article is highly informative and seemingly accurate. However, there are areas that are somewhat unclear for instance the second paragraph of the lead section is very difficult to comprehend. The paragraph feels like it is just thrown together. The information is relevant however the overall clarity of that paragraph should be examined. The article also contains a few small grammatical errors. Jwood57 (talk) 18:07, 6 February 2015 (UTC)
- Approved! Josef Horáček (talk) 02:47, 8 February 2015 (UTC)