Julie.summey
February 2009
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Hi Julie, I've been reading your new article, and unfortunately it has a lot of problems. Most of the content is fluff of the sort that appears in self-help books, and of the sources you have used, the only one of acceptable quality is Gazzaniga. There are definitely things to say about this topic (the Lateralization of brain function article says some of them), but reputable research studies don't paint nearly as clear-cut a picture as your article portrays. I'm at something of a loss about how to deal with this. Since you are a new editor, I would really like to give you a chance to fix the problems if you are interested in doing so. Could you let me know your attitude about this? Regards, Looie496 (talk) 04:27, 21 February 2009 (UTC)