Juliannrose
Joined 13 February 2015
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Iwilsonp in topic Microsoft Pinpoint
Microsoft Pinpoint edit
The reason why I reverted your edits was that they appeared too promotional to me. For example, your addition "while giving them the ability to connect with other Microsoft partners to meet the unique needs of customers" sounds too much like an advertisement. Also, you should also not put external links in the article text. If they are sources, put them between the ref tags.
Now, that does not mean that you cannot go and update the article again in a way that is more compliant with Wikipedia guidelines. Iwilsonp (talk) 01:35, 17 February 2015 (UTC)