User talk:Joce.lee/sandbox

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Pauliana Landreth in topic Article Evaluation

Article Evaluation

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Joce.lee (talk) 13:30, 1 September 2017 (UTC)Reply

I would like to know the monetary gain hospitals have by using a registered SANE nurse.
I would like information on patient repor with a registered SANE nurse and how this contributes to the efficiency of the examination.Joce.lee (talk) 21:18, 15 September 2017 (UTC)Reply

I reviewed your article as it is and seen the adjustments you are looking to do to improve it. They are great ideas. Maybe if you could source the first sentence, and the source listed on the end of second sentence focuses on pediatriac's. A source for adult's might be helpful. Good luck and keep on searching.TLund (talk) 14:39, 13 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

After reviewing your article I believe you have a good opening paragraph. The next thing that needs to be done is to add the different sections such as the training that SANE nurses have to go through. I noticed that you took out SANE-A and SANE-B examiners from the original article and I think this section should be added later in the article. I believe this will give people who are looking to get their SANE license insight on the different specialties available to SANE nurses. Other than expanding on your article, I believe you have a great start. Keep up the good work. Akammin (talk) 20:32, 14 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

I think that you are off to a great start. I agree with the other edits that were suggested and I think that you should also add more sections and headers. What kind of evidence is collected? What is the timeline for evidence collection? Are SANE nurses employed by hospitals, justice systems, women's centers etc? What kind of team do these nurses work along side? Do the same nurses work with children or do they need additional certifications and training? What is the history of SANE nurses? how new is this profession? I hope that these questions can help guide you to expand this article. Very important work!Pauliana Landreth (talk) 00:26, 19 October 2017 (UTC)Reply