User talk:Jnhowie/sandbox/An Unheard Cry
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Ikverardo
Great work Jordyn! The way you have everything set up is very clear and easy to understand. The chapter analysis, as well as the analysis of the poems were very helpful in helping me to understand An Unheard Cry. You have a lot of very useful information. However, there is quite a few grammatical errors that could be worked on. I think it would also be interesting if you spoke about the form of the novel and the poems within it.
The analysis of the chapters is good. One suggestion is to maybe change the way you numbered your sections it's a little confusing. Ikverardo (talk) 14:56, 7 October 2017 (UTC)